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Passion is now but strife just around the corner
Slinking closer, the tendrils of its presence precede it
The building tension peaks and I have to wonder
If the cataclysm of pain isn't the same as passion.
Tears, tears of anger dripping down my face
The rain of sweet love that's become twisted
Blood, the blue blood that flows red
That bleeds heavy and hot for you
Sweetest touches, slowly, lingering
Whispers of softness
Tearing through me, ripping me apart
Breaking my heart.
no idea where this one came from
probably from the song i was listening to at the time

Between the sadness and the smile
Lies the flicker of the fire
You always said this never hurt you
I always said you were a liar
with all the towers and the wires
There still lies a little silence
Two hearts and one connection
One voice lacks emotion now
I always knew....
You tried your best and you knew it wouldn't last
They were the words that she placed on her casket
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DeidarasModel Jun 22, 2009
Whoa. Nice wording, amazing word choice. Love the way it's put together.

Blood, the blue blood that flows red
That bleeds heavy and hot for you


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Contradicting, a great one. Really depicts the passion and pain of heart break.

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Bold-Firedrake Jun 22, 2009  Professional Photographer
thanks
glad you liked it ^.^
i have no idea where it popped out of...my brain is a scary place sometimes.
thanks :heart:
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DeidarasModel Jun 22, 2009
You're welcome!

And that's where we first get our poetry, from the mind, then it starts flowing from the heart. <3
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Bold-Firedrake Jun 22, 2009  Professional Photographer
yeah that's very true ^.^
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DeidarasModel Jun 22, 2009
:)
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Bold-Firedrake Jun 22, 2009  Professional Photographer
^.^
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